Hey,
Sure do.
With essay its very simple as well, as long as you have a structure.
The introduction should include 3 sentences :
1. Broad statement about the topic
2. Rewrite the question
3. In this essay [ I will discuss why (your two arguments) or (advantage and disadvantage).
For a paragraph : it consist of 4 parts
1. Opening sentence
2. Supporting sentence
3. Evidence
4. Closing
Conclusion includes 2 parts:
1.In this essay, i discussed . . ..
2.In my Opinion, Rewrite the question.
I will post the summarize and essay i got in the exam.
Summarize Written test:
1. The first one i received was about two female (Lets call her linda and emily cause i forgot the name) who were trying to save turtles nest and providing kinda like an airBnb service to earn money to support their effort.
So my answer was: Linda and Emily launched an initiative to protect turtles nest and keep the beach clean via providing accommodation service to guest's to raise funds for their efforts.
2. The second one was relating to cows and their ability to digest grass and how human cant digest grass . The passage contained information like grass and cows connection and other details like size of a cow stomach etc .
My answer was: Cows possess an organ the size of medicine ball, which allows them to digest high quality plant protein that a normal human with a single stomach is unable to absorb.
Simple, between the length of 25-35 words
For the essay, my question about the use of formal exam to assess students learning.
My answer:
Introduction : Remember the 3 parts i described above on introduction.
1. The use of formal examination to assess a student's learning is becoming widely used in many educational institutes around the world. [Broad statement]
2. Many educational institutes adopt this method to analyse a student's learning. [Rewrite the question]
3. In this essay, i will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of utilizing Formal examination to assess a students' learning. [In this essay. (your arguments)]
First paragraph:
1. Many educational institution use formal examination because it is an effective and efficient way to determine a students' learning. [Opening sentence]
2. Clearly, formal exam helps to identify the strength and weakness of an individual student. [ Supporting the opening sentence]
3. For example, students who are accepted to prestigious universities like Harvard are able to do so, because they have worked on their weakness and shortcoming to pursue higher education. [ Evidence]
4. The use of formal examination is an effective way to assess a students' learning. [ Closing sentence = rewrite the opening in a different way]
Second paragraph:
1. In contrast, formal education should not be the only method to assess a students' learning. [ Opening]
2. Whilst some student excel in theoretical and analytical skills, there are some students who excel in different areas like sports, music, etc. [Supporting]
3. A recent survey on Australian catholic university reported that 35% of undergraduate students preferred other method's of assessment to be adopted to test their learning. [Evidence]
4. Students' learning should not be determined by only using formal examination as the determining factor. [Closing]
Conclusion : Remember the 2 parts in a conclusion.
1.In this essay, I discussed the advantages and disadvantage of using formal examination to assess a students' learning.
2.In my opinion, formal examination is an efficient means of identifying the strength and pitfalls of a student, but it should not be the only method adopted to assess a student.
This is exactly the way i wrote in my writing and i got 90
My test result on August 2017:
LRSW 83,86,76,90
I have to resit again cause i need 79 each bands
